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Personal Essay Titles

Here are a few personal essay titles that I gave to my Junior Certs today. I’m really just posting them here so I’ll have them for again! Most of them are taken from a random selection of previous exam papers. Some of the titles that usually come up lean in particular directions – towards descriptive short stories or dialogue heavy ‘scenes’; others towards journalistic opinion pieces – so I’ve avoided them deliberately because I want today to be about the art of personal writing. What these titles have in common is that they ask you to insert yourself into the essay, to reveal who you are as a person – your thoughts, beliefs, experiences, hopes, dreams, personality and sense of humour.

  1. Heroes
  2. The things about myself I’d most like to change
  3. In 30 years time…
  4. Childhood memories
  5. Life’s little luxuries
  6. A significant event that changed my life
  7. It’s a weird and wonderful world

p.s. Another title I made up recently that produced some interesting responses from Leaving Certs was “Write a personal essay about some of the funniest/most embarrassing moments of your life so far”.

 

 

How to study English…

I received an email ages ago, an email I’ve been ignoring because I wasn’t sure how to answer it. The essential question I was asked was how to go about studying English and specifically “imagine if a student had an A1 essay on anything that could possibly come up – how could you prepare for the actual exam?

My first thought was ‘are you a good writer?’ In the same way that you might ask someone if they are artistic or musical or good at sport. If that seems an unfair question, I apologize for freaking you out, but I do believe having a ‘way with words’ is a talent like any other.

However, if we leave aside the natural ‘writer’ in you, the problem essentially comes down to this. Don’t study and you’re guaranteed to do badly. Learn off essays (in the worst case scenario, ones you haven’t even written yourself) and you might not do much better! It all depends how flexible you’re willing to be in the exam and on whether or not you wrote these ‘A1 standard essays’ to begin with. If you did, then you have become a good writer through practice and have really engaged with the texts on the course. Well done you, you are on course to do well. If you didn’t, you’ve probably been relying too heavily on other people’s opinions without ever bothering to form your own.

The more you focus on pre-prepared answers, the less likely you are to engage with the question which is asked on the day. If you don’t twist what you know to suit the question that comes up, you will do very badly indeed. One example that springs to mind comes from last year’s leaving cert. We – like most teachers & students – had looked in detail at the theme of revenge in Hamlet. The question that appeared was “Revenge and justice are finely balanced themes in the play Hamlet“. In order to answer this question you could draw on your knowledge of the theme of revenge but you also had to be able to discuss the theme of justice – who has suffered injustice, whose job is it to deliver justice in the kingdom, what might true ‘justice’ (rather than simplistic revenge) look like? How could Hamlet achieve justice? Does he need to punish anyone else? (his mother, Ophelia?). Does he punish anyone else unfairly? (Rosencrantz & Guildenstern???) Also, how are these themes of revenge and justice connected? balanced? is it possible to get revenge and achieve justice at the same time? How does Hamlet convince himself that his revenge is in fact some kind of divine justice and that he himself is God’s appointed avenger?

Now imagine for a second that you had prepared an essay on the theme of revenge – in fact you have an ‘A1 standard essay’ learned off. You may be tempted to just write it, in fact you may lapse into some kind of auto-pilot. But your A1 standard essay won’t get you an A1. It might, in fact, only get you a C3, particularly if you have ignored the word ‘justice‘ and the phrase ‘finely balanced‘ or simply thrown them in in a tokenistic way in your introduction and conclusion. What a question like this aims to assess is the difference between the student who will just regurgitate a pre-learned answer (that they may or may not have written themselves) and the student who can think on their feet, can write well under pressure and can prove that they truly understand the play no matter what question is thrown at them. In this instance, convincing yourself that you have an A1 answer ready for ‘every possible question’ that could come up (and to be honest this is simply impossible – there are too many variations in the way that the question can be worded) may in fact become a kind of false security blanket. Because, let’s face it: if doing well in English was that simple, you’d just need a book of revision notes and the ability to rote learn them all off.

On the other hand, blindly avoiding studying English because you don’t know what will be on the exam paper is almost guaranteed to lead to an essay of complete waffle. Not knowing what you want to say AT ALL can lure you into the awful trap of just telling the story. This style of answer will get you a D3. If it’s really bad, you may even fail.

So what is the solution? Bottom line: you need to know, understand and appreciate the texts you have studied. And you need to be a good writer.

Perhaps to ‘study’ English you need to break down each section into ‘possible’ questions, come up with bullet points (including relevant quotes) and if you have time practice writing your answers under exam conditions. But if you do this, in each case respond to a very specific question – find one from a previous exam paper or google it – here’s what I found when I typed ‘Hamlet Sample Questions’ into my search engine. You can do the same for any of the poets…

In the meantime some advice:

  • Before you start writing, break the question down into key words or phrases.
  • Plan your paragraphs and ensure that you use what you know to respond in every single sentence, and every single paragraph to the question asked.
  • Avoid parroting back the question incessantly. But you must connect what you’ve said directly to the question asked. So use synonyms.
  • Ensure that you only include information which is relevant to the question asked, irrespective of how much you have to leave out to achieve this. There’s no point showing off what you know if it’s not relevant to the question asked.

In terms of studying, spend time actually thinking about the characters, themes, key moments from your single text, comparative and poetry. Know them really well. When I was doing the Leaving Cert. way back in the day I remember dreaming about W.B.Yeats and King Lear and writing things down when I woke up. Yes, I know this makes me a hopeless nerd. But then I always did love English…Meanwhile, I don’t think I ever dreamt about the life cycle of the liver fluke!

Of course being prepared means you are far more likely to do well than someone who is unprepared. But be willing to improvise, to create, to think in the exam so that you pay attention to the most important thing of all. Answering the question asked.

p.s. Studying for paper one is a whole other kettle of fish – for my opinions on what you might do to prepare for QB and the essay see this blog post.

p.p.s. Comprehensions are something you get good at through practice. I intend to write a whole other post on this. Eventually. So watch this space. But not too closely; I can’t handle the pressure…

Proposals

Think about the word for a second. The first thing that sprang into my mind was a marriage proposal. Asking someone to marry you involves proposing that you are the best possible person for them to spend the rest of their life with. No wonder people get nervous! To propose is to put yourself on the line.

The other scenario that came to mind was when you’re at a meeting. Someone will come up with an idea, propose it, need someone else to back them up by ‘seconding’ it and even then there will probably be a vote where people consider the relative merits of your proposal and decide whether or not they want to back it. So in making a proposal you are putting yourself out there, believing – or maybe just hoping – that people will support you on the strength of your idea or your persuasive personality. To propose is to be certain – but it also involves taking a risk.

So while there are no clear guidelines, a proposal falls more or less into the category of the language of information. You should get to the point, avoid any waffle or repetition, pay close attention to structure (make sure it’s well laid out and organized) and use clear, concise language to get your message across.

Remember however, that if this proposal is going to be selected from lots of other proposals it will need to be good. You need to argue your case, persuading your audience that you are the best possible candidate and/or your idea is the best possible idea for whatever it is that you are proposing.

In general follow the same rules you’d use for writing the content of a formal letter, but don’t put in addresses and you may want to use headings (in the same way that you use headings for a report) or you may decide to only have one overall heading which is the title of your proposal. There is no hard and fast rule here so don’t get hung up on it.
 
These are the basic content rules used for formal letter writing:
  • introduce your reason for writing immediately
  • in your middle paragraphs describe in detail why you or your idea should be selected
  • finish by saying what you’d like to happen next and possibly including details of your phone number, availability.
 If you are ‘selling’ yourself think about exploring the following:
  • relevant experience
  • qualifications and/or academic record
  • relevant hobbies or voluntary organizations you’re involved with
  • personality traits
If you are selling an idea, imagine you are on ‘Dragon’s Den’
  • focus on the unique selling points of your idea or product
  • show that you have done your research (handed out a questionnaire, given away free samples, tested the product or idea on a fairly large/diverse group of people)
  • make it clear that you know your target audience – the people who will buy your product or service –  and discuss their specific needs and how you can meet their expectations.
  • have a financial plan (a set of projected costs and profits compiled into accounts)
  • express a belief that this product or service is worth doing, either for financial reward, or for the good of the community or for altruistic reasons (to help others) or if possible all of the above.
Here’s a link to “How to Write a Proposal” – I just googled it. It looks pretty similar to my advice and it includes a few sample proposals which are worth a look.
 
Finally, for those cynics out there who jumped to conclusions when I said a marriage proposal was the first thing that sprang to my mind, it’s not because I’m waiting for one. My handsome husband is another committed blogger – you can find him here.
 
p.s. Here’s the checklist I prepared for my leaving certs when they were writing proposals recently:
 
 Proposals Checklist

 Who will do What? When & Why?

 Step 1: Introduce you idea. You begin with a brief sentence outlining what it is you propose to do / create and mentioning who it is aimed at.

 Step 2: Flesh out the details. The body of the proposal will first offer specific detail on the project, outlining exactly what you propose to do/create, step by step.

 Step 3: Include rationale. (1. selling points, 2. research, 3. expectations 4. expertise). This is where you explain why you believe this approach will be effective (in achieving whatever it is the people paying for this project want to achieve). Focus on the unique selling points of your idea. Have you tested this idea on a sample group? Discuss the specific needs of your target audience and how your project will meet their needs and expectations. You may wish to briefly outline why you are the perfect person to lead this project (relevant experience, qualifications, personality).

 Step 4: Timeframe and financial plan. Specify how long this project will take from start to finish. Include an estimated cost and mention that a detailed set of accounts for projected costs (and potential profits if applicable) is included in the appendix.

 

Why study English?

I’ve just stumbled upon this essay I wrote while doing my H.Dip. It’s no masterpiece but I found it interesting (if a little cringeworthy) to read on a few levels. In many ways it’s like a time capsule, written 10yrs ago and making no reference whatsoever to visual texts, social media, blogging or digital literacy. Even some of the references read like they belong in the dark ages – literacy stats from 1997 rather than our recent PISA scores. Yet it still captures many of the aspirational, as well as purely practical reasons why I still believe fundamentally that the subject I teach matters. Hugely.

‘Justify the inclusion of English as a subject on the school curriculum’

It has been said that we only truly recognise the value of something when we are deprived of it. When a loved one dies their absence encompasses an area much larger than their presence ever did. When we fast for charity, we are hungry from the moment we begin, even though our bellies are still full. So it is with the gift of communication. Something wonderful lies hidden in the everyday acts of speaking and listening, reading, writing and understanding. We take them for granted because we cannot imagine life without them; only those deprived of such jewels truly appreciate their worth. The deaf community embrace sign language as a means of escaping their silent world; the blind use Braille to access the joys of literature. Studying English encompasses so much more than the written word – it embraces oracy and comprehension as well as reading and writing skills; it influences our ability to understand and achieve in every other subject on the curriculum; it provides us with practical skills for dealing with life outside of the classroom; and it nurtures the ‘intellectual, imaginative and emotional growth’ of the individual. In order to justify the inclusion of English as a core subject in our schools we must look at each of these areas in greater detail.

Although English is considered an adopted language on this fair island, one cannot escape or ignore its dominance in modern day Ireland. For the vast majority of Irish citizens it is our first language, the medium through which all communication takes place. If we accept this and leave the debate about the relative value of ‘Gaeilge versus Bearla’ to one side, we are still left with the issue of what exactly it means to study English as a subject. In primary school emphasis is placed on the basic literacy skills of reading and writing but upon reaching secondary school the issue becomes more complex. We make the leap from ‘learning to read’ to ‘reading to learn’.

Therefore our purpose in reading becomes an exercise in decoding the meaning of the text. We no longer write solely to practice the art of writing itself (spelling, grammar, joined writing etc.): we compose in order to express ourselves, to explore our experiences in a variety of forms, such as diary entries, autobiographical sketches, poetry and prose. We learn to express ourselves verbally within various genres – radio programmes, anecdotes, drama. Ideally, we acquire a greater sophistication in our use of language, both when comprehending and composing and a wider appreciation of the forms and functions of language.

Why then is this ability to manipulate language considered such an important part of our education? Surely the language we speak from an early age, listen to on the television and in the classroom, write when filling out forms and questionnaires, read in magazines and on billboards, (or less frequently these days, in books and newspapers) will develop naturally and seamlessly out of our everyday experience? Unfortunately, this is not the case. An OECD report from 1997 found that 25% of Irish adults were functionally illiterate. The 1998 U.N. report on poverty stated that ‘more people in Ireland are functionally illiterate than in any other industrialised country’. Furthermore, psychologists have established an irrefutable link between ability in English and general academic achievement. For the time being the vast majority of subjects are both taught and examined through the medium of the English language. The point comes down to this – those who successfully negotiate the complexities of their first language find it easier to acquire knowledge in a range of other disciplines, and to express this knowledge effectively.

The study of English also provides us with practical skills for dealing with life outside of the classroom. Students learn how to communicate information in such forms as letters, CVs, and application forms. They learn to distinguish between language used to provide factual information (such as death notices) and language used to persuade (such as advertising). In the face of capitalism, an awareness of the various ploys used to target audiences and sell products is essential for those who wish to remain in control of their spending. Social life demands that we adapt our language and behaviour depending on the situation, and the new Leaving Certificate English Syllabus lays appropriate stress upon the variety of registers we use in everyday interaction (grandiose, formal, informal, slang). The aim is to develop a sense of audience and language appropriateness in the students. Our ability to express ourselves clearly effects job interviews, telephone conversations and our relationships with those around us. Studying English is justified if it enhances even one of these areas of our lives.

Finally, the ‘intellectual, imaginative and emotional growth’ of each student is developed through the study of English. As we have already established, language proficiency enhances academic achievement. Furthermore, students are encouraged to criticise, analyse and evaluate the various texts they encounter and to place texts in direct relation to each other through the comparative component of the senior syllabus. They encounter new worlds and experiences in the novels and plays on their course and are encouraged to compose narrative works themselves, thus expanding and actively using their imagination. They encounter a range of emotional states indirectly through literature, film and drama and begin to express and thus release their own feelings through the use of language.

What then is this ‘something wonderful’ that lies hidden in the everyday use of language? For me it is the dawning realisation that language is a living, changing entity to which no fixed, immutable meanings can be ascribed. We communicate with the text as much as it communicates with us; we bring ourselves to any understanding of words and their meanings. Finally, if we can truly grasp and appreciate the notion of paradox, we can bring ourselves to a greater understanding of the human condition: of what it means to be both sentient being and animal, simultaneously good and evil, creatures who believe in a power greater than ourselves and yet have no proof. It is here that the true value of language lies, in the space where deprived of something, we recognise its true value.

Spelling be tricky…

Here are a few links to force your brain into thinking about the least fascinating aspect of becoming good at English. Spelling correctly.

http://www.commonlymisspelledwords.org/

http://www.alphadictionary.com/articles/misspelled_words.html 

http://www.factmonster.com/ipka/A0781709.html