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Personal Essay Titles

Here are a few personal essay titles that I gave to my Junior Certs today. I’m really just posting them here so I’ll have them for again! Most of them are taken from a random selection of previous exam papers. Some of the titles that usually come up lean in particular directions – towards descriptive short stories or dialogue heavy ‘scenes’; others towards journalistic opinion pieces – so I’ve avoided them deliberately because I want today to be about the art of personal writing. What these titles have in common is that they ask you to insert yourself into the essay, to reveal who you are as a person – your thoughts, beliefs, experiences, hopes, dreams, personality and sense of humour.

  1. Heroes
  2. The things about myself I’d most like to change
  3. In 30 years time…
  4. Childhood memories
  5. Life’s little luxuries
  6. A significant event that changed my life
  7. It’s a weird and wonderful world

p.s. Another title I made up recently that produced some interesting responses from Leaving Certs was “Write a personal essay about some of the funniest/most embarrassing moments of your life so far”.

 

 

Why study English?

I’ve just stumbled upon this essay I wrote while doing my H.Dip. It’s no masterpiece but I found it interesting (if a little cringeworthy) to read on a few levels. In many ways it’s like a time capsule, written 10yrs ago and making no reference whatsoever to visual texts, social media, blogging or digital literacy. Even some of the references read like they belong in the dark ages – literacy stats from 1997 rather than our recent PISA scores. Yet it still captures many of the aspirational, as well as purely practical reasons why I still believe fundamentally that the subject I teach matters. Hugely.

‘Justify the inclusion of English as a subject on the school curriculum’

It has been said that we only truly recognise the value of something when we are deprived of it. When a loved one dies their absence encompasses an area much larger than their presence ever did. When we fast for charity, we are hungry from the moment we begin, even though our bellies are still full. So it is with the gift of communication. Something wonderful lies hidden in the everyday acts of speaking and listening, reading, writing and understanding. We take them for granted because we cannot imagine life without them; only those deprived of such jewels truly appreciate their worth. The deaf community embrace sign language as a means of escaping their silent world; the blind use Braille to access the joys of literature. Studying English encompasses so much more than the written word – it embraces oracy and comprehension as well as reading and writing skills; it influences our ability to understand and achieve in every other subject on the curriculum; it provides us with practical skills for dealing with life outside of the classroom; and it nurtures the ‘intellectual, imaginative and emotional growth’ of the individual. In order to justify the inclusion of English as a core subject in our schools we must look at each of these areas in greater detail.

Although English is considered an adopted language on this fair island, one cannot escape or ignore its dominance in modern day Ireland. For the vast majority of Irish citizens it is our first language, the medium through which all communication takes place. If we accept this and leave the debate about the relative value of ‘Gaeilge versus Bearla’ to one side, we are still left with the issue of what exactly it means to study English as a subject. In primary school emphasis is placed on the basic literacy skills of reading and writing but upon reaching secondary school the issue becomes more complex. We make the leap from ‘learning to read’ to ‘reading to learn’.

Therefore our purpose in reading becomes an exercise in decoding the meaning of the text. We no longer write solely to practice the art of writing itself (spelling, grammar, joined writing etc.): we compose in order to express ourselves, to explore our experiences in a variety of forms, such as diary entries, autobiographical sketches, poetry and prose. We learn to express ourselves verbally within various genres – radio programmes, anecdotes, drama. Ideally, we acquire a greater sophistication in our use of language, both when comprehending and composing and a wider appreciation of the forms and functions of language.

Why then is this ability to manipulate language considered such an important part of our education? Surely the language we speak from an early age, listen to on the television and in the classroom, write when filling out forms and questionnaires, read in magazines and on billboards, (or less frequently these days, in books and newspapers) will develop naturally and seamlessly out of our everyday experience? Unfortunately, this is not the case. An OECD report from 1997 found that 25% of Irish adults were functionally illiterate. The 1998 U.N. report on poverty stated that ‘more people in Ireland are functionally illiterate than in any other industrialised country’. Furthermore, psychologists have established an irrefutable link between ability in English and general academic achievement. For the time being the vast majority of subjects are both taught and examined through the medium of the English language. The point comes down to this – those who successfully negotiate the complexities of their first language find it easier to acquire knowledge in a range of other disciplines, and to express this knowledge effectively.

The study of English also provides us with practical skills for dealing with life outside of the classroom. Students learn how to communicate information in such forms as letters, CVs, and application forms. They learn to distinguish between language used to provide factual information (such as death notices) and language used to persuade (such as advertising). In the face of capitalism, an awareness of the various ploys used to target audiences and sell products is essential for those who wish to remain in control of their spending. Social life demands that we adapt our language and behaviour depending on the situation, and the new Leaving Certificate English Syllabus lays appropriate stress upon the variety of registers we use in everyday interaction (grandiose, formal, informal, slang). The aim is to develop a sense of audience and language appropriateness in the students. Our ability to express ourselves clearly effects job interviews, telephone conversations and our relationships with those around us. Studying English is justified if it enhances even one of these areas of our lives.

Finally, the ‘intellectual, imaginative and emotional growth’ of each student is developed through the study of English. As we have already established, language proficiency enhances academic achievement. Furthermore, students are encouraged to criticise, analyse and evaluate the various texts they encounter and to place texts in direct relation to each other through the comparative component of the senior syllabus. They encounter new worlds and experiences in the novels and plays on their course and are encouraged to compose narrative works themselves, thus expanding and actively using their imagination. They encounter a range of emotional states indirectly through literature, film and drama and begin to express and thus release their own feelings through the use of language.

What then is this ‘something wonderful’ that lies hidden in the everyday use of language? For me it is the dawning realisation that language is a living, changing entity to which no fixed, immutable meanings can be ascribed. We communicate with the text as much as it communicates with us; we bring ourselves to any understanding of words and their meanings. Finally, if we can truly grasp and appreciate the notion of paradox, we can bring ourselves to a greater understanding of the human condition: of what it means to be both sentient being and animal, simultaneously good and evil, creatures who believe in a power greater than ourselves and yet have no proof. It is here that the true value of language lies, in the space where deprived of something, we recognise its true value.

Topic of the Week: Injustice

Unless you’ve been living under a rock for the past month you’ll have heard of Kony 2012. Watched by over 77 million people (as of the 14th March), it has sparked an incredibly heated debate worldwide about the nature of social activism. This video certainly demonstrates the power of social media to spread awareness. It is a brilliant – if not always accurate – piece of film-making and offers the simple message that a man capable of such horrific crimes against humanity should -MUST – be arrested and punished. So why all the controversy?

Well first of all, it has raised some incredibly important questions about activism. Will people really need to stick up posters everywhere on 20th of April now that the whole world already knows who Kony is? Is sticking up a poster an effective way of bringing about real change? How many of the 77 million simply watched the video and then did – and will do – nothing? They still got the feel-good factor of being ‘involved’ in a campaign for social justice but all they’ve done is sit on the couch and click ‘play’ on youtube. Not exactly a recipe for changing the world! And if this is the case, do viral videos like this send out a dangerous message, that all you need to do to stop a mass murderer is click the like button on facebook?

Of course I’m guilty of oversimplifiying here. The film-makers want you to spread the video, but THEN take action. Buy the action pack, thus donating to their charity and directly raising funds for the campaign. Here again we run into difficulties because huge questions have been raised about how this charity spends the money it receives. Only 32% of it goes in direct aid to the countries this charity ‘supports’. But that doesn’t mean you should ignore your urge to give money to charity – this would make you no better than the ‘slackers’ who watched the video and then shrugged their shoulders and did nothing. It perhaps just means that Trocaire – a charity which publishes transparent accounts and spends less than 1c of every €1 raised on admin costs  – might be a more appropriate place for your donation. And I’m sure you can cope with not having the Kony 2012 bracelet/poster/action pack. Can’t you?

The most serious criticisms of the video spring from the source we should listen to most carefully however – Ugandans themselves. It seems those who know the real situation see this video as closer to fiction than documentary, using footage a decade old, implying that Kony is still in Uganda (he hasn’t been for years) and suggesting that his army of child soldiers numbers 30,000 (an outdated figure – it’s estimated that he has a few hundred supporters at most – and not necessarily ‘abducted kids’). Most insulting of all is the implication that Americans need to parachute in, Superman style and fix this problem (unilaterally) because the Ugandans are helpless to help themselves. If I were a Ugandan activist I’d find this pretty hard to swallow.

Of course the danger here is that we move from oversimplification to overcomplication – from ‘slacktivism‘ to cynicism. And the end result is sadly all too often the same. We do nothing. How then are the highly educated, cynical elite who debate and complicate a far too simple youtube video on a complex issue ANY BETTER THAN those who take in the message of the video hook, line and sinker? Can’t we somehow find a middle ground between the idealism of the original video – misguided and misrepresentative as it is – and the knowing cynicism of those who know that a youtube video is unlikely to change the world for the better, and may just give Joseph Kony the noteriety he craves, whilst simultaneously undermining Ugandan efforts to win much needed international investment?

Remember when you first watched the video you probably felt the urge to help. Don’t ignore this urge. It is the most noble urge you can have, a testament to our common humanity, a recognition that injustice exists and must be challenged. However, remember that doing something is not necessarily better than doing nothing; doing something is only better if you think carefully about what it is you are doing. Even if your intentions are pure and you simply want to help, acting out of impulse without having all the facts can often be worse (unintentionally) than not acting at all.  The debate over whether foreign aid works is far too complex to get into here but suffice it to say that not all ‘help ‘ is actually helpful. So if you want to DO something, choose carefully. Donate some money to a charity which fully publishes it’s accounts and uses internationally approved development strategies – like Trocaire or Concern. Surely that is the most appropriate, balanced and genuine response to the two extremes represented in this global viral debate.

Topic of the Week: Being Irish!

What does it mean to be Irish? It means we drink too much, swear too much, shout at the telly (especially when there’s sport on), love Taytos, have at least nine cups of tea a day, talk about the weather all the time (but none of us own a rainjacket!), have the Irish mark (left shoulder, two dots) and at least two scars from where we picked at our chicken pox, squirm whenever someone pays us a compliment (“this jacket? I got it in Penneys for a tenner“), love pub quizzes, love curry chips, love Fr. Ted, secretly wish we could win the Eurovision just one more time, think RTE is shite (but still watch it), think the Rose of Tralee is shite (but still watch it – but only because our parents have it on!), think Winning Streak is shite (it is – but still watch it when one of the neighbours is on!). We don’t like boastin’ though so I can’t tell you that we’re great craic, fierce loyal, give heaps o money to charity and wouldn’t see ya stuck if you were havin a rough time of it. ‘Cause if I said all that you might think I was gettin’ up meself like!

Sample exam questions:
2008
Write a speech in which you argue for or against the necessity to protect national culture and identity.

2007
Imagine you have a friend in another country which is considering the introduction of a ban on smoking in public places. Write a letter to your friend advising him/her either to support or not to support the proposed ban. In giving your advice you may wish to draw on the recent experience of the smoking ban in Ireland.

2001
Write a personal essay in which you explore your sense of what it means to be Irish.

2001
You have been elected President of Ireland – write the first speech you would make to the Irish people.

2001
Write a letter to Martin Mansergh in which you outline your response to his view of young Irish people.

Hello fellow teachers!

A few of you have contacted me but in case there are more of you out there lurking in the shadows, hello! Feel free to use any of the resources on the website as photocopiable resources. My only request is that you identify their origin – just stick ©leavingcertenglish.net at the bottom, s’il vous plait! Also, I’m considering turning what’s here into a reference guide for Paper 1. It seems like a step backwards in some ways but until all of my students are sitting in front of me with an internet connected device in their hands, I’ve got to stick with paper! My thinking is if I had 30 reference guides in my room I could use them with different year groups in class and they could use the website as a reference point when doing homework (my survey’s say about 92% have reliable access at home). That way I wouldn’t be responsible for so many rain forests getting destroyed…

Anyway, I’d really appreciate some feedback on this one. If there’s no demand, I won’t bother, I’ll just self-publish a couple for my own purposes. If the demand is there, I’m also considering having a go at creating an interactive eBook. So if you’ve any feedback, you can contact me by clicking on the feedback button or email leavingcertenglishnet@gmail.com (no dot before the net!).

Thanks,

Evelyn.